Graaaaaaah!! This has been so awesome!
Great final page. Love panel 7 (71), Sin's eye looks absolutely stunning.

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"Very well. Since you're all out of perspective and no one else seems to have it in this BLOODY TOWN, I'll make you a deal. You provide the food, I'll provide the perspective, which would go nicely with a bottle of Cheval Blanc 1947." Ego, Ratatouille

Woo! These have been really cool. All your effects are top notch

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I'm just a squirrel, looking for a nut.

~TreadstoneAssassins

wow love the effects

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Wolfcub

*THE JAK & DAXTER NUT*

Amazingly done Jenny, this has been so wonderful to read ^^
I love what you've done with the Ratchet and Clank logo too!!
I sure hope this is coming out after Tools of Destruction ;D

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_{"Be who are you are, and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those that matter don't mind."
Pirate at heart!
~Avatar made by the gorgeous *Envelopes~}

Me like and I'll be watching for your lovers gallery.
Damn, this intro trailer really made me hooked on the action and the happening here.
So much posetive thoughts and feelings about it to you and Shinragod! ;D

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" people think it's a crime, to tell'em what's on my mind.... I guess I'm a CRIMINAL"
4ever Ak! 8D

Spec-TACULAR!! The coloring and shading is just amazing! I love the backview of that guy in the top right panel. ^_^

-JenL

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I believe in Jesus Christ as my lord and savior. ^_^

O.M.G... I am so pumped for Chris' comic to come out!!! ^^ You've done a wonderful job building up the tension, and your comics have all been beautiful! Wonderful job, hon!

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Jesus Christ is my Lord and Savior, ツ

Again Jenny, how you can take control of my character and make him more effective beyond my imagination still makes me feel special. I am pleased you liekd Sin so much you wanted to make this comic as a teaser for my 'Immoral Flame'. I do indeed hope to release it soon and I am definitely going to make this comic count, particularlly since you have given so much character to Sin and the story itself. May I just say how dark and mysteriosu you make sin jsut by giving him that glare in his eyes. Something tells me that you enjoy looking into Sin's eyes and crawling into his character. That cold hard stare alone intensifies his power and intent.

The classic, villai nturning his bacjk on what he has wrought is also pleasing. Sin indeed has that non chalant attitude towards what he destorys. Walking away from the carnage, pausing to give that evil stare, and read yo spread more malice. No question about it, I love the way you expand Sin as a character. It truly shows me how muc hyou like him. I indeed think I have created my ultimate character and you helped Jenny.

The logo in itself is interesting. It's quite a daring move Graphics wise to make the word IMMORAL small to the word FLAME. to me it reads the steady build up of the flames as they start and then begin to rise and suddenly are out of control. This no doubt symbolizes fire and the fiery powers Sin can conjure. The rust helps too since it makes it feel like the title itself is being burned. I might want to use this logo Jenny if you'll allow me. It's just about perfect for me to use. You were right it is VERY cool. I enjoy your aesthetic applications of words.

This was a comic worth reading Jenny and I enjoyed all your effects, the personification of Sin's character and the logo is jsut tops. I SO want to release Immoral Flame soon. I think it won't be long now.

Many thanks Jenny. I enjoyed this 'Immoral Flame' trailer; truly I did. You're a huge inspiration to me in many ways. ^^

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Oh! This is so going to be great! = D You really did a nice job of presenting each page! All of the details, all of the emotions, all of the unanswered questions that are bound to become a shock when the comic begins... ^^ All I can really say is, Really outstanding job! ^___^

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"Coughing up feeling just for you
To find something real to hold on to
But there is a hole inside my heart
Where waves of my love come tumbling out. "
"Nobody loves you"- Garbage


I'm gay and not ashamed.